My Feedback
- The relationship between the introductory paragraph and the photo does not look totally considered yet, especially right when it switches to the vertical display.
- The recipe title at the top of the page needs more consideration in terms of sizing and formatting at smaller browser widths.
Peer Feedback
Positive
- Color scheme is working, reflects the retro feel of image
- Likes how intro paragraph and image switch to vertical display
- Good formatting of instructions
To Improve
- Right side of image extends too far
- Try moving image up in line with yield and time
- Adjust Title to one line at smallest scale
Moving Forward
I’m going to work on fixing some of the minor details that my peers pointed out. I also want to think about the user-experience a bit more. For example, I want to think more about how well this scales on a phone rather than just a browser window. I also want to go through the instructions and bold some of the measurements because I know that I search for those when baking to double-check my measurements.